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I can feel it still beating
Still beating in my hand
The heart
That you ripped out of me
Pumping ghost blood
Around a ghost body
And with it goes
The warmth of my flesh
And I stand
Like an icy tableau
And the pain of being apart
From my torn bleeding heart
The fire of pain
Sole consolation
And now I watch
My lifeblood
Spill out of my rent chest
My vision grows dim
My body cold
And at last
Once more
I may rest
©2006-2009 ~Hermia-Sylvan
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I suppose that this might be a poem about love too, but its just so gory.

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hmmm maybe u wanted to give it a raw feeling or something, but i think tht punctuation would do good... its great otherwise, it creates vivid images in my head !! good job!

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